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The -Darkest- Ray of Light by ~ssssnakeh123:iconssssnakeh123:

Categories Literature > Prose > Fiction > General Fiction


that one little barb stuck to the heart can finish you so
Quickly.
leaving it in, the poison slowly spreads,
or you can Pull it free.

thus you Fade out or quickly Vanish.

through that hole, the ones that filled it spill out, and wave goodbye.
All you can say is "I'll miss you, dear."
©2006-2009 ~ssssnakeh123
:iconssssnakeh123:

Author's Comments

My little tribute or whatever to Steve.

Dearest Terri and family, I know you won't see this, but it's the least I could do.

Anyways, stuff.

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~Kiyari Sep 6, 2006, 3:43:42 PM
...I like this. D; I'll give you the details on MSN or something. But know that I like it.

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Thrice upon three days three blind mice were walking down the road. They walked down three different forks and fell off three different cliffs. They screamed three different screams while falling and died.

Moral of this Story: Don't eat lip balm
:iconssssnakeh123:
~ssssnakeh123 Sep 6, 2006, 4:32:33 PM
Then I await you. Thanks~ <3

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"Ah! My eye! It itches! :upset:"

To my friends: :glomp: :hug:

FE9: PoR owns your soul! D:
:iconguardian-moogle:
~Guardian-Moogle Sep 6, 2006, 7:38:11 PM
It's really nice. It shows a decision between living in constant growing pain
or death.

What I really like about this is the title, how cryptic it is and how at first it doesn't
seem to have anything to do with the writing. But on closer examination, you
can see it's all about the darkest ray of light.

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I am the Contrast between the Darkness and the Light.
:iconkiyari:
~Kiyari Sep 6, 2006, 10:14:18 PM
Hold that thought. The next time I'll be online will most likely be the weekend. The first fullday was today and we already have homework and a project.
...
WTF @ HAVING PROJECTS ON THE FIRST DAY. D<

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Thrice upon three days three blind mice were walking down the road. They walked down three different forks and fell off three different cliffs. They screamed three different screams while falling and died.

Moral of this Story: Don't eat lip balm
:iconssssnakeh123:
~ssssnakeh123 Sep 7, 2006, 4:20:24 PM
Hey you suck for your mom not letting you on the computer during school </3. Maybe a note if you can? =O

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"Ah! My eye! It itches! :upset:"

To my friends: :glomp: :hug:

FE9: PoR owns your soul! D:
:iconkiyari:
~Kiyari Sep 7, 2006, 4:23:42 PM
Not so much the computer as much as using it for recreational purposes. BUT THEY HAVEN'T CAUGHT ON ABOUT DEVIANTART YET. ;D They will soon though. <:

Maybeh. <3

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Thrice upon three days three blind mice were walking down the road. They walked down three different forks and fell off three different cliffs. They screamed three different screams while falling and died.

Moral of this Story: Don't eat lip balm
:iconssssnakeh123:
~ssssnakeh123 Sep 7, 2006, 4:48:28 PM
Whoa you're on =O

--
"Ah! My eye! It itches! :upset:"

To my friends: :glomp: :hug:

FE9: PoR owns your soul! D:
:iconssssnakeh123:
~ssssnakeh123 Sep 7, 2006, 5:09:44 PM
Your deduction of it was pretty much perfect. 1337 skillz yo.

--
"Ah! My eye! It itches! :upset:"

To my friends: :glomp: :hug:

FE9: PoR owns your soul! D:
:iconkiyari:
~Kiyari Sep 7, 2006, 6:34:58 PM
Indeed I am. <:
...
You mean on dA, right?

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Thrice upon three days three blind mice were walking down the road. They walked down three different forks and fell off three different cliffs. They screamed three different screams while falling and died.

Moral of this Story: Don't eat lip balm
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